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DTS chapter 3 page 2

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Nairu-kun's avatar
Please, please, please spell things right. The words circumstances, merely, believed, choices, thrown, and blame are all spelled wrong. It could really improve the quality of your comic if you used correct grammar.

[link] is a very helpful website. I find myself there often.

Oh, and using a different font for the text would be nice too. Times New Roman isn't fun to look at. Comic Sans MS is a better choice.
Of course, handwriting is also nice for variety, unless your handwriting is revolting. If so, stick to computer font. =_=

And you forgot puctuation in the first sentence of the second panel.

The art's nice though. Please continue.