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Wha!? Was that his friend that just made everything explode? Anywho, good job, though it seemed like this could chapter could have been spread out into two longer chapters. That way, the woman would have had more time to develop as a character and we could have got a little more backstory on the town and its hero. Or maybe I'm missing something.